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LisaHenry

Lisa Henry

I'm a writer. I write m/m erotica. Kind of dark stuff, even though in real life I like rainbows and puppies and kittens. Not all at once though. That would be overwhelming.

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On The Dock - Kade Boehme

3.5 stars

Nope, I'm not crying. Move along, nothing to see here.

This free short packs an emotional punch. It lost me a little toward the end with the big time shifts and the stuff with the soldier's mother, it just felt unnecessary, and I would have preferred more depth and less "telling" if that makes sense, but that's often the issue I have with short stories -- something always has to be condensed but the actual end-end: perfect.

Read it. It's free, the narrator has a wonderful voice, and it's lovely.